Wednesday, October 10, 2018

Star persona video feedback and learner response














WWW:
  • The image is really well-the medium close up works well.
  • music is effective-appropriate for time-lapse and lets the pictures do the talking.
  • In terms of editing and brief. Almost exactly 2 mins and the pace is solid.
  • good lighting
  • good attention to detail
  • show more final images
EBI:
  • In terms of mise-en-scene and the brief. Surely its more horror than insane asylum (or it is horror set in that location?)
  • perhaps a reflection of lack of experience in make-up but more of a spoof or parody horror feel here.
  • the camera should've been directed more towards my face
  • needs more final shots to see makeup


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