Sunday, November 3, 2019

Coursework: Preliminary exercise


1) State the genre you have chosen for your TV drama - family or crime drama.


Crime drama


2) Choose at least three TV dramas similar to your concept and watch the trailer and one scene from each. Make bullet-point notes on everything you watch, commenting on camerawork, editing, sound and mise-en-scene





- Many close in the trailer, convey the characters emotions and also establishes who the main protagonists will be
-editing is very faced paced suggesting that there will be a good amount of action and suspense throughout
-The mise en scene that is common is the orange jumpsuits as we see the main cast all wearing them which connotes that they are doing some kind of time in jail.


- This trailer uses a number of medium and wide-shots to establish the large ensemble cast for the TV show as well as a close up of every single main character as we get to know them through the one close-up and medium shot of them side by side.
- The pace of the trailer starts off relatively slowly so that it could set the atmosphere and let the audience know what type of setting the show will have. But as it went through towards the middle of the trailer the pace gets a lot faster as we are introduced to some action and enigma codes such as 
-We can see that the main characters wear school uniform to show how they are a academy learning their powers and also we see knives and masks which reveal that there will be a darker side to the TV show



-This trailer has a number of camera shot ranging from close-ups to long-shots. The close-ups were mostly to show the protagonists and the long-shot were used to show the action sequences. Also, a lot of it was filmed in the dark with low lighting to reveal the dark themes and seriousness of the show.

-Super hero costumes clearly reveal that the show is clearly a superhero genre

3) Write a script for your TV drama scene. You'll find guidance for writing a script in the BBC Writers' Room (click on the Script Library to read real examples of professional TV scripts).



Inner monologue
Daryl: What's this noise that i'm hearing? vibrations I can hear them

Mum: Daryl? why you home so late today?


Daryl: Umm, I just had a long day at school


Inner monologue

Daryl: Did my mum notice? nah she couldn't have?

Inner monologue

Daryl: The vibrations their getting louder! I cant take it no more!

*Teleport's across room*


Daryl: What the hell was that??

4) Write a shot list containing EVERY shot you plan to film AND additional shots to create flexibility when editing. These additional shots are often close-ups, cutaways, alternative angles or similar. I advise using a simple table on Microsoft Word to set out your shot list 


Shot List – Syke School

Shot No.
Shot
Filmed?
1
Extreme close up of Daryll eyes

2
Wide shot of Steele posing

3
Medium shot of Arthur Meditating

4
Medium shot of Daryll, steele and aruthur together in a circle

5
Wide shot of Jay teaching Steele self defence

6
Close up of arthur focusing

7
Wide shot Daryll running 

8
Medium shot of Agents

9
Medium shot of jay and daryll aruging

10
Over the shoulder of daryll entering house

11
Wide shot of Arthur trying to chat up a girl

12
Medium shot of Daryll telling athur to hurry up

13
Wideshot of Steele and Daryll bonding

14
Steele, arthur, Jay, daryll, skipping

15
Wide shot of Agents saying : we need to find them

16
Close up of Steele crying

17
Close up Jay Uses his mind reading ability

18
Wide shot of daryll talking to masked person in confrontation

19
Arthur helps a wounded Daryll wide shot


Shot No.
Shot
Filmed?
20
Agent aims gun

21
Daryll teleports wideshot

22
Steele uses superpeed wideshot

23
Arthur Flies off wideshot

24
Jay Uses mind read close up

25
Steele walks into school awkwardly 

26
Steele and Daryll sit on bench together

27
Arthur see’s them secretley, walks off

28
Shot of daryll walking in house over the shoulder 

29
Transition to mum asking why hes late closee up



Shot No.
Shot
Filmed?
30
Voiceover saying daryll hears a voice as he goes up the stairs

31
Daryll looks distressed close up

32
Daryll On bed stressing jump cuts medium shot

33 
Close up of his pain of his face

34
Daryll starts shaking teleports wide shot

35
Daryll appears across the room medium shot looking confused

36
Steele speeds around a park wideshot

37
Arthur and steele are talking in the park medium shot



Shot No.
Shot
Filmed?
38
Daryll teleports to them wideshot

39
They all make jokes as a group medium shot

40
Music fades down as an angry close up of Arthur appears

41
Close up of Jay Stressing out in his room

43
Steele crying by herself medium shot



Shot No.
Shot
Filmed?
44
Daryll hands on his head looking shocked Medium shot

45
Fades to black




5) Plan your mise-en-scene: what iconography are you including to ensure your audience understands the genre? Plan your cast, costume, make-up, props, lighting and setting. For this preliminary task, use just one location to keep it simple.

What will your characters wear?

The characters will be seen wearing modern western clothing, the three main characters will wear common teenager clothing. Jay the slightly older character will be wearing a leather jacket and will look in general more professional

What is the costume supposed to communicate to the audience?

The teens attire communicates how they are still carefree in their youthful years due to lack of professionalism where as Jay's "cool" look suggests he has experience for his mentor role.

How does this link to your Statement of Intent in terms of creating representations?I mentioned how the teenagers involve themselves in juvenile behaviour further showing the meaning of the rebellious teen look. In my statement of intent I mentioned how Jay was a mentor to the main 3 people

Lighting
My trailer will have mostly low-light and during the day I will mostly display motivated lighting giving my trailer a natural look. I will film in both day and night. During the interior shots I will use a back lighting and film in low-light a lot as well. When I am outside I will use natural light as when I am outdoors I will be filming during the day-time. I will also film a small amount of exterior shots outside and will use a phone flash light for lighting.

Actors


Main

Me- Daryll - Many dialogue scenes, wide shot, medium, close up etc over  the shoulder
Vaagesan- Arthur- Many dialogue scenes, wide shot, medium, close up etc
Steele- - Many dialogue scenes, wide shot, medium, close up etc
Jay- Andi Many dialogue scenes, wide shot, medium, close up etc

Darylls mum- my mum- Dialogue Medium shot

agent- Close up, medium shot looking professional and serious

Make-up

No make up in particular because it is set in this era and there is no inhumane looking character

Props

-car
-scarf
-Basketball
-phone
-bag


Setting

This should already be largely planned using your script. However, now is the time to specify exact locations - if a classroom, which one? How will you arrange it with the teacher? When will you film there? For external locations, try and take pictures of settings or use Google Maps and Google Earth. Spending quality time planning your locations can make a huge difference to the professionalism of your film. AQA also seem to prefer external rather than school-based locations.

-Class room (d block) Schedule a time, most likely will be in my form room

-My house (northolt)
-my drive way(northolt)
-Ravouner Park
-rooftop ( ealing)
-Northolt Station
-Southall Near Mcdonalds
-


6) Plan a shooting schedule that will ensure everything is filmed by the deadline. Include when, where, who is required and what shots you will complete at each time/location.


28/10/19 northolt locations

4/11/19 Class room (d block)
10/11/19 Southall Near Mcdonalds
14/11/19 Top of car park ealing





Wednesday, October 30, 2019

Prelim LR

1) Type up your teacher's feedback in full plus a summary of the comments you received from other students in the class.

Teacher Feedback

-Good voice-over.
-Jump-cuts communicate meaning and mental state of the character.
-the effect worked-could've looked bad but it worked well.

class feedback

www:
-good camera-work
-good special effect
-voice over
-good music choice
-comedic element
-editing
-narration

Ebi:

-acting needs to be better
-too many pauses

2) Using a combination of your own reflection on the preliminary exercise and the feedback you were given, write three WWW bullet points and three EBI bullet points for your TV drama scene.

WWW



  • Voice over was effective and created a narrative
  • editing for effect was a good aspect
  • camera work
EBI

  • Acting
  • Too many pauses
3) How effectively did you complete the objective you laid out in your mini preliminary exercise statement of intent?

I effectively completed the mini-prelim as I showed the character Daryl and his life at home, as well as the way he manifested his powers for the first time showing confusion and shock.


4) What have you learned from the preliminary exercise that will help you in the actual coursework project?
I learnt that I had to finish my filming quick so that I could focus on the editing for a longer time as I had to create complex SFX such as the teleportation as I will using even more SFX in my official trailer.


5) Now you have completed the preliminary exercise, will you change anything in your actual TV drama trailer? This could include narrative, character and script or technical elements such as mise-en-scene, camerawork and sound.


I will keep everything the same but in my real trailer I will show the other main characters and their abilities as well as showing other characters like Jay and the agents who would make my trailer exciting with the diverse character selection. My narrative in the trailer will be a gradual showing of special abilities in combination with conflict between character emphasising the drama aspect. My full script was not shown as I only had 30 seconds but the full scene of my preliminary task will not be in my trailer. The sounds will also be dynamic as I will have more base in the music and have a techno synth style of beat. Lastly, I'll have wide range of shots like I did in my preliminary, this time using more angles such as a high angles and low angles.

Wednesday, October 9, 2019

Coursework: Ignite presentation learner response


1) Type up your feedback in full including the ratings out of five for each of the six categories. 


WWW:

-Interesting concept
-detailed plan

EBI:

-lack of representation theory
-Delivery could of been more fluid
-more research for industry
-concept may be hard to create
2) Use this feedback, comments from peers and your own reflection on your presentation to self-assess and write a detailed WWW and EBI for your own coursework concept and presentation as a whole.


The things I primarily did well was I managed to create a concept that is very intriguing to an audience, as well as making sure I planned and researched well due to how I explained the story of my TV drama as I added a equilibrium, disequilibrium and a new equilibrium. 

The way I could have improved was to add more representation theory as I only talked about subverting stereotypes, also my delivery could have been better however I had changed my concept last minute not leaving me with much rehearsal time. In addition, I could of added more for industry because I only included social media platforms. Lastly, my concept was said to be hard to create which may be true to an inexperienced editor however I have practised these effects numerous times.

3) Write a paragraph discussing how your presentation will lead into your actual coursework production. Do you need to update your statement of intent? Does your narrative offer enough clarity? Is it appropriate for the audience specified in the brief? Does it fit the genre you are aiming for? Can you add media terminology or theory to your statement of intent now you have reflected on your presentation and seen others?


My presentation will follow into my coursework production as you will see aspects of the super power genre which will add visceral pleasure to my audience also creating action codes and enigma codes. Also, I will cast the characters I spoke about and make sure to give them scripts to follow. I believe my narrative was clear because of how I gave a beginning, middle ,end which you will see aspects of in my trailer. I will make sure I stick to the watershed times by having no swearing and making the action without crossing boundaries such as showing blood and other extreme violence. I believe it strongly fits the genre because my characters will be solving crimes using superpowers which fits my genre.